Final Piece Development

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Just some ideas developing for my final project. I plan to make an artefact that reflects a different take on the four seasons of the year.

My first idea involved planting a tree branch on a plant pot full of soil with a canvas painted with leaves. The four seasons are then reflected by leaves which will be suspended onto the canvas.

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I then decided to maybe focus on the man made structures in the park. The sundial in the flower garden is very prominent and this will allow for the artefact to have a practical use. These ideas were inspired by my visit to Somerset house where a lot of the designs had practical applications in the real world.

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A more simplistic idea for an artefact. A plant pot with hand made leaves or branches to represent the seasons to as to not take directly from nature.

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More sundial ideas.

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My final design idea which includes four canvases that will depict the four seasons in their own unique way. These canvases will be suspended by rope from the ceiling. Although it may not have any practical uses, I feel this is a unique take on reflecting the placebook place by displaying change within my place.

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1) Visual Communication:

In what ways does the visual communication/message of the piece meet the needs of the brief?

The piece meets the needs of the brief by displaying my connection with my place whilst also visually displaying the phemonenology of the seasons on the individual four canvases. These four canvases along with the supporting plaque reflect the relationship between people and nature. The audience are able to physically interact with the display by using their sense of touch and sight, where they will form connections that the four canvases represent the four seasons of the year.

Repeated exposure will eventually wear down the exhibit but that is ultimately the last message of the display. Eventually, man will use up the natural resources of nature and it will be destroyed in the future. The display is only temporary and fleeting.

In what ways does the visual communication/message of the piece fail to meet the needs of the brief?

The piece fails to meet the needs of the brief by not being able to communicate the message above in words. I feel like there could have been more man made structures within the evidence in order to align more within the briefs needs.

What are the strengths of the visual communication? Why?

The strengths of the communication is the uniqueness of the piece. It is a one of a kind piece that focuses on the audiences senses and phenomenology. Also a lot of symbolism is included on each canvas in order to clearly convey the four seasons which are easily identified by many.  These symbols include flowers for spring and the beginnings of life, the absence of decor on the summer canvas denotes a clear sky and the prime of life, the autumn leaves on the ground to symbolise the twilight and the white layer of grass with discarded twigs to symbolise winter and death.

Also it shows mans dominion over nature in a way since i managed to roughly recreate the seasons/nature with artificial products.

I think the text on the supporting plaque is also clear enough to see at a reasonable distance as the white easily contrasts against the dark area of the image background.

What are the weaknesses of the visual communication? Why?

None of these notions are clearly communicated in the exhibition which could have done by including the explanation in the supporting plaque poster. I also should have included images of man made objects in the final piece perhaps. But maybe the man made elements which the final piece is made of reflects that enough but not clearly.

In what ways could the piece be mis-read or mis-understood by the audience? Be specific about who the audience is.

The audience is families and normal people who would visit galleries in their spare time as a day out. It it not meant to be solely for artists and critics.

It could be misunderstood by hose who do not have four seasons as some countries only have two seasons and may not understand the symbolisms that are attached to four which are also different. For example, it is possible for some countries that have only wet and dry seasons to have people who will not identify with spring summer autumn and winter.

In what practical ways could the piece be developed or improved?

More information could have been photographed and included in the information plaque.

I could have mounted the canvases on something sturdy and not fragile. Perhaps i could hang it on a wall using nails or tape at least.

I could have added more things on each patch of grass. The summer one looks very bare compared to the others. Maybe if I had included a sunflower and the Spring canvas could use more flowers. I could have also used a better substitute for snow but i did not know or possess any materials that would be a better replacement.

2) Good Design? Evaluation

In what ways have you considered the ethical implications of your project process and outcomes?

I considered using real grass but not only would that be impractical but it would so not be ethically responsible as i would have to rip some grass out and it would not even last very long and go brown.

No actual natural elements are used in my project as most everything is artificial in order to convey ideas relating to nature.

My subject and brief does not offend or does not aim to offend. I believe that there is nothing within my works that will offend anyone of any culture.

3) Reflection of own working practices:

How was my time keeping?

I think my time keeping was bad because this was a year long project and there were definitely times where I would take long breaks from the project and completely forget about working on it.

How was my analysis of the brief?

I think my analysis of the brief was alright but it seemed to me that we could hand in anything I wanted as long as it had to do with the place and stick to the needs of the brief.

How was my research?

I thought my research was okay. I did not manage to take any evidence images from winter as I was sick for a very long time which I regret not doing because my project seems lacking in that sense.

Otherwise I am confident in my research since I documented my research in the form of illustrations which is my interpretation of the evidence and I learned a lot from the evidence workbook and wanted to reflect that in my research and leave the audience questioning and coming to their own interpretations.

How did I draw conclusions from my research?/How did I use research to generate and develop ideas?

I used research to develop my ideas by seeing what inspired me and what I enjoyed drawing/researching about. I found that focusing on trees really resonated with me because I thought they were interesting to draw and study. I liked the symbolism that came with them and after practising drawing them I very much enjoyed drawing more.

I also liked the flowers because by closely observing things I was able to find inner beauty within all things which is also an element of my project.

How did I use experimentation during the project? How can I make this more effective?

I used experimentation during my project by coming up with different ideas in the form of sketches. I would need to consider the restrictions and limitations of designs though since I was planning to make a three dimensional artefact. After many ideas I settled for an amalgamation of my original idea and an inspiration from the trip to Somerset house.

In what ways did I show that I had achieved the Learning Outcomes? How can I improve this next time?

I have increased my awareness of the constraints and opportunities of a design brief by carefully analysing what can and cannot be done reasonably. There may be a lot of ideas in my head with what I can potentially produce as a final product but sometimes the constraints of reality may not always grant me the ability to see those ideas come to fruition. This is done by learning intelligent fast failure to make sure I do not waste time and effort into something that will not work practically or in a design sense.

I feel that my understanding and ability to evaluate solutions to a design brief that encompasses a criteria has deeply improved over the course of the project as I was given a larger time frame and thus allowed me to make considerable and detailed analysis of the criteria of the briefs.

What parts of the project did I enjoy most? Why was this the case?

I enjoyed the sketching part of the project. I  really like drawing and I took the opportunity to sketch as much as I could. I especially like learning how to draw trees and am very fond of my improved tree sketches I drew over time as I improved my drawings, I eventually grew as an artist and designer as I observed more carefully and had more patience which I lacked earlier on.

What parts of the project did I enjoy least? Why was this the case?

I did not enjoy not having any ideas for my supporting final piece. I had a big main final piece which I was proud of but could not think of something original to do for a supporting final piece like a plaque or something to describe the main piece.

I do not enjoy not being able to be unique in my ideas and so I ended up having something generic which I am still proud of and I think it looks good and suitable but I could have done better.

At what times did I work best? Why might this be the case? How can I ensure that I work well at all times?

I always work best near the deadline. This time I did not rush because I had learned from last year and made sure everything was done at most the day before so there was no mad dashes or last minute changes which would stress me out. I gave myself more ample time however which allowed me to be focused but not overly stretched.

What areas inspired me? Why was this the case? How could I follow these up?

Drawing the trees in my place really inspired me because I found that there was so much symbolism attached to them that I could not help but want to draw them. I found it challenging at first to draw the leaves but with careful study and practice I succeeded in drawing trees I am proud of.

What areas were challenging or difficult? Why was this the case?

It was difficult to stick the fake grass to the canvases because I had limited resources at the time. Making the flowers were also difficult because the materials were expensive so I had a limited amount of those as well and I messed up a few times which was really frustrating because of my limited experience with origami.

Do I need to develop certain skills? Do I need these now? Or later?

I suppose I could develop my crafting skills to potentially make more artefacts. Luckily for me I work as a builder so I will probably learn these during my time as one.

Evidence

Evidence handbook –category evidence

 

Q: why are images 1 and 2 more effiecient than image 3 at telling people about climate change and the future?

 
A: By using visualisations and presenting information in a pictorial fashion allows the lay person to understand information much easier without the need for words which may contain/involve jargon from professions/fields of study they may not be familiar with.

The skill of Graphic Designers to present the messages they try to convey is important because it makes them responsible that produces positive outcomes for the audience.

Image 1 and 2 for example are visualisations that connote the idea of climate change but unlike image 3 of the polar bear which signifies a negative connotation, suggesting that the ice will soon melt and it will be forced to swim and eventually die from exhaustion if it does not find a solid foundation soon. 1 and 2 communicate that yes, climate change is affecting the planet but it is designed in such a way to show audiences of more positive solutions which can be achieved and aware.

 

“There are three kinds of lies; lies, damn lies and statistics.”

-Mark Twain (quoting Benjamin Disraeli)

 

Q: What do you think this means? Why should we be aware of this?

I think this quote means that the use of statistics to present something as fact is dangerous. Researchers and experts in fields of study that publish statistics could easily have bad intentions and easily use statistics as a tool for lying.

We should be aware of statistics because it is data conducted by experts and our interpretations of the data can be very misleading depending of the presentation. Data can be displayed in bad ways in order to skew the truth.

 

Q: Where might visualisations be used as evidence? How should they be presented?

A: I think visualisations could be used as evidence if they are from independent sources who do not wish to seek gains with ill intentions.  They need to be presented in a non-biased manner in order to not affect the audience’s emotions and instead be factual.

 

 

 

 

Q: Are maps evidence? What are they evidence of? When can you trust a map? Or not?

A: I believe the way maps are presented effect their status as evidence. For example, a map created for factual purposes can be trusted whereas a map created for art is not in my opinion. This is because the purpose for maps in my mind is to display the discoveries made by humans for navigational purposes, they are evidence of locations made with scientific specifications and in my opinion are objective. Whereas a map for art usually conveys a meaning that can be positive or negative and therefor can affect audience’s emotions which influences their reactions.

 

Q: What do we mean by the word evidence? How can we “know” that evidence is valid? Apart from the pieces of evidence themselves, what else do we need to make us feel confident in believing the truthfulness of them?

A: Evidence is something that shows that something is true/proven. I suppose there is a level where we cannot 100% without a doubt know that something is true or not unless something is studied extensively and every meticulous detail is accounted for and recreated accurately.

I think we as people need to experience the evidence for ourselves wholly, not just by being exposed to it visually and by having accurate knowledge of an experience as well.

Q: Think about these different scenarios? What would you count as evidence (something that shows something is “True”)? Who decides in these scenarios what counts and how are they different from each other? Precisely what does the evidence show?

 

  • A murder case being tried in court – no conflicting witness testimonies, CCTV footage, DNA samples. Experts in law, security, detectives, and the jury decide whether the evidence given is true.
  • Same murder case being discussed in the tabloid newspapers – The interpretation of the case would probably be decided by the editor because there are other motives behind this form of media to sell papers to make a profit. The evidence used would probably be photographs and eye witness accounts from first/second hard sources so the reliability is varied.
  • A factory is polluting a river through its waste outlet – Statistics, Images, negative impacts on the environment and community. Local authorities?
  • You have measles – Symptoms, information readily available online and passed events with similar occurrences. Doctors, nurses, GPs.
  • An Ordinance survey map of your home area – Data, visual evidence. Cartographers.
  • A map of disputed borders – historic evidence, geologists, official documents.
  • A fox got in your hen house and ate some chickens – number of chickens, noises from chickens, feathers from dead chickens which may have been stolen, history of foxes in your area. You, CCTV, neighbours, chickens.
  • An archaeological artefact from Pompei – artefacts, images, documents of the find. Archaeologists, historians, geologists.
  • A fossil of the first bird – Images, videos, plastic mould casts. Archaeologists, Zoologists.
  • Your partner proves their love for you – actions, words. Your partner.
  • Political party discusses the record of the opposite party
  • Climate change is man-made – statistics, visual change in the environment, readings from experts – Scientists, Activists, Experts.

 

Q: When you consider evidence as indexical signs how does it change anything you explored on the previous page about what counts as evidence and to whom? Does it make any difference? What if the indexes from the field were to be used in court to claim land rights or suggest that an attack had taken place there? How would thinking of things through a semiotic lens make a difference? Or not?

 

A: using our knowledge of the world and taking indexical signs into account we can deduce many things using our common sense. Smoke is an index of fire for example, there cannot be smoke without fire. If there is tangible indexical signs then there is more or less evidence. Depending on the subject at hand, you are able to use selective evidence in order to support any case one may make. I do not think it really makes a difference for this reason as I think people already think this way already.

 

Q: What, if any, of these connotations could help you believe something about the egg shell in the field is “true”? If it is true for you, is it actually “true”?

A: I think that something being true to oneself is different from other “truths” in the sense that if someone has a vivid, emotional or sensory attachment from an event then it could be considered “true” to them. The associations from indexes are often based on knowledge previously gained. For example, you would probably not associate an eggshell with predators if you had no experience or knowledge of them. Or If you were familiar with the symbolic connotations egg shells have with spring, one’s idea of truth is not necessarily wrong but it can be different.

 

Q: What if we looked at the bird’s broken egg shell through the lens of Phenomenology and what it made us feel like? What would be its texture? Is it clean or dirty? How light or heavy is it? Did you find it in a warm dry field or on a wet, windy beach?

A: I think Phenomenology heavily links to emotions. Again, if it triggers something within someone its “truth” could be considered real or “true”. I think it all boils down to personal experience. I think events and indexes which are personally felt by an individual can be regarded as true to oneself for they have experienced it first hand and by using knowledge gained at the time of the experience they can deduce how they feel.

Q: What impact would emotions and other senses be having on the jury here?

What about the lens of politics and propaganda? Or advertising?

A: I think the applications of emotions and other senses my affect the jury. It is normal for people to feel emotions when faced with a case they are able to sympathise with and so this could lead to the defendants or prosecutors to tailor their case in order to target emotions and senses of the jury by either heavily describing the scene or presenting visual evidence in order to emphasise their points.

 

Q: How do you know that what someone says is reliable when it is in an advert for, say, an eco-friendly product, or in a party-political broadcast before an election? Is what they say ‘evidence’?

A: It is my belief that one cannot fully trust an advertisement because they all have something to gain and will present their cases in any way they see fit in order to maximise a response. This could involve visual graphics or video ‘evidence’ which could potentially be staged. What they say may be evidence to some extent but I am sure they will alter or exaggerate their ‘facts’ in order to first captive their audience and then get them to remain captivated in order to continue being exposed to their product or services.

Q: Is something propaganda when you believe it to be false or made by your enemy? Is it information when your own side or ‘tribe’ makes it? Give reasons for your answer.

A: I do not think that something is propaganda if I believe it to be false or made by my enemy. My view on propaganda is that it heavily pushes the agenda of the party who makes it based on their beliefs and ideologies. It can still be considered information but whether it is true or false information is another argument. My own side or tribe that present information do not have the obligation to publish evidence that are 100% factual rather, the purpose of propaganda is to convince audiences to sympathise with our agendas by using whatever means necessary and this can more often than not, involve lying or obscuring the truth or presenting statistics in such a way that it favours one’s cause.

 

Q: Can we discount gut feelings? What do we feel about shock advertising? Or should we be rational and look at things more sensibly? How is this done?

A: I think it would be foolish to discount gut feelings. I think that gut feelings are a sensation for a reason. A pseudo sixth sense within the mind that stems from our inner instincts so that we may consider whether something is our idea of right or wrong which is ingrained in our very being.

In my opinion, shock advertising is very ‘edgy’ in that I personally think that it tries too hard to shock its audience. This may be the case for me because I have been exposed to these notions throughout my course but to the average consumer or audience they might be easily triggered by shock advertising. It places audiences outside their comfort zone and forces them to be exposed to things that they normally wouldn’t be exposed to in their ‘bubbles’ of reality which makes them likely to consider the messages of shock advertising because they have not encountered such things before or not as often.

Rational thinking in this sense is not easily achieved to the uneducated or the ignorant. For instance, audiences would need to be made aware and knowledgeable of a subject before they can think rationally. People often fear what they do not understand and so repeated exposure to a subject may lead to them being more educated and they can use the knowledge they gain to come to their own conclusions.

 

Q: When someone expresses something that they feel is true through the media of visual art or literature and poetry, song or performance – is this ‘evidence’?

A: I believe this is evidence because the artist or creator has been exposed to the subject and has evidentially done research on it in order to create their own interpretation of it in a creative medium. It may not be considered ‘hard’ evidence but I think that for someone who must want to outwardly express their thoughts and ideas some aspect of it must be ‘real’ in a sense.

Q: What does this mean: “someone expresses something they feel is true”?

A: I think it means that if someone expresses outwardly something they feel is true outwardly then it makes it ‘real’ and exist within the world as they have created something through their own vices. I think believe must be involved for something to be made real in this sense.

Q: Why do we study Shakespeare, or the speeches of Martin Luther King, or Bob Dylan’s Blowing in the Wind, or Picasso’s war image, Guernica, as historical or cultural evidence?

A: All forms of art and culture we make is an expression. I think we study creations from these people listed above and many other in order to understand what led them to express themselves by studying their time period, their personal lives which would lead them to produce their creations. It is so we understand the processes and circumstances that led them to express the world around them and in doing so we may understand how to express ourselves.

Q: In what ways do you think poems, prose, songs or music could be described as “visualising” something, or at least making us have a greater understanding of something through our senses and emotions, not just through our ‘factual’ knowledge (cognition).

A: These creative vices can be considered visualising something because even though different people can be exposed to these creative outlets, not everyone will experience it the same way. They may have different images in their heads and interoperate these creations uniquely based on their experiences and the way they understand the world.

 

 

Q: Do you find the presentation convincing? (Do you believe what they say is true?) Why? Who decides what we see and how we see it?

A: I find some presentations in museums convincing because they are displayed “factually”. The subjects are not decorated much, they seem to remain preserved the way they were found or created.

Q: Do you find the presentation in these museums interesting? Why?

A: I don’t really know. I like the way they are presented because they are very straightforward and the information seems factual. But art galleries such as the ones from Somerset house present works of art which are very non-traditional and leads me to believe that their presentation also has something to do with the signs and signifiers and more often than not they do which is why I like how art is evolving so much. I never used to understand or appreciate art that was not displayed on a canvas but I do now because I learned that every aspect of a creation has meaning behind it.

Q: What is the difference between being convincing and being interesting? Which is more truthful or real?

A: I think there is not much difference between being convincing and Interesting. The results of both speak for themselves. Convincing audiences can lead to them taking actions which can potentially impact and change the environment around them.  Whereas being interesting can also lead to action by audiences if their interest is piqued. It can be argued that being interesting is more truthful and real because it should be stating the facts of a subject which is not always the case. I feel that being convincing uses any means (sometimes underhanded) to convince the audience to sympathise with a point of view. Both have the potential to be made real.

Q: Is the presentation “didactic” (guiding you what to think)? In what ways can we engage with the displays and make our own “truths” about the evidence?

A: I think the presentation is didactic in a sense as it requires the audience to visualise what uses the displays were to the people who made them or choose to think what their purposes were. We could research the displays ourselves and actively look for sources and reports relating to them as well as understand the context of their creation. This would make it our truth and though may not be completely 100% accurate, it makes it ‘real’ in a sense.

Q: Reflect on how the work in this PDF has helped your understanding of the usefulness of visualisation.

A: Visualisation has many forms and uses. Whether to send a message or convince its audience, The beauty of visualisation is that it is unique to each individual an no interpretation is the same which reflects on humanity itself. We are all unique and all have the potential to create based on our experiences and sense.

Q: Reflect on how the work in this PDF has helped your understanding of what evidence might consist of, how to present it and what makes it valid and why.

A: Evidence can consist of many ‘real’ things such as visual or physical evidence. It could also be presented second hard through the experiences of others such as creators who express themselves through the use of are and design. It is up to the audience to choose whether to believe in the evidence they are presented using their own experiences and sense in order to make conclusions.

 

 

 

 

 

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Unfortunately, these images did not come out very well. They are sketches of the landscape of the park and an opening beneath the trees.

Being underneath the trees whilst drawing them made me feel relaxed and euphoric. It felt like i was in the centre of a flower with the petals being the trees and I was looking up at the sky. I felt very free especially with the occasional warm breeze that would bring me back into the moment.

I think the sky is important when reflecting a place because it can be seen as a major part of it. In this case, everything came together aesthetically and I felt very content which I wanted to communicate in these sketches.

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Here is a showcase of a rose(?) and a spider. I found these during my walk through the park one day. I thought the spider was a good subject to draw because its shape is very peculiar in nature. a lot of people are scared of them but once you get to know them and observe them (much like a place) then they can seem completely different.

I drew a transition from a budding flower to a flower in full bloom from a side profile in order to reflect the burst of life I experienced during summer where I associate freedom as it is a time for where I don’t have any deadlines to meet.

During my time as a student I have never really known summer to be anything else but freedom to some degree so that is why I chose these subjects.

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Here is some mad made objects within the park. This is a clubhouse for the members of a bowls club.

The clubhouse is situated in a patch of grass with is well maintained by human influence. It does seem very out of place because of its location but I never really thought too much about it since I have seen it so often.

It does not seem very negative to be honest. It is a place where the elderly mostly convene and have a calm relaxing game with their friends surrounded by nature. So I think it is actually a positive addition to the park.

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I’d just like to draw some attention to the blue flower I had sketched because it is probably the only flower I liked drawing. This is a biased opinion of mine because I like the colour blue and it got me thinking that I have the power to depict this place however I want. I made the effort to spend more time on the flower than I normally would on the other sketches so is my non-objective point of view good? Even without any ill intentions, there are those who could decode this in a way I would not think is positive.

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Here are some more sketches in colour of the flower garden in the park. I have grown a little bit more confident in using the pencils and throughout the time of this project, I feel like I have grown as an artist in utilising my coloured pencils.

I have decided to write some haikus which are Japanese poems which follow a 5 7 5 syllable structure. I am very interested in the culture of Japan and liked the idea of including some of that interest in my placebook which not only reflects my interpretations of my experiences in a place but my influences as well.

 

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The first signs of spring, many plants and flowers have bloomed and I decided to try out sketching something different this time.

I sketched a plume of yellow flowers as it highly contrasts with the colour scheme of winter. The bright yellow and bunched formations of the plant could be compared to nature giving birth once again.

This notion could be further emphasised by the abundance of animals (mostly birds) around the park. Life here seems to be teeming. There is a lot of movement, again making more connections with life cycles and birth.

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This is the beginning of the season of spring and the end of the winter. I still used the sketch pencils in order to keep in theme with winter in the bleakness but I would like to attempt to use coloured pencils in spring.

I could see that some of the trees had started to sprout some leafs and this confirms the circle of life or lifestyle of the seasons reflected through nature and specifically through trees.

Although a lot of winter is still apparent, there are signs of life starting up once again and could be a signifies of hope, it’s very poetic actually.

 

 

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Another one of my favourite sketches. This depicts a snow covered tree located on the hill of the park. It looks like a Christmas tree and produces a festive vibe which is one of the positives to come from winter in the west.

This particular tree stood out to me because it seemed to not be phased by the weather at all and just did its own thing. While the world turned and time passed by, it didn’t complain, it didn’t give up. It just stood its ground and even though it was covered in snow or was rained or hailed on it kept being itself.

I really liked that because it could serve as a reminder to others to be themselves and stay grounded.